New Tune, The Oracle

DJ Henson · **Posted:** Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:01 am

Hi all,

I was hoping to get some feedback on my new track: -

TJH - The Oracle (High Quality, Broadband)

TJH - The Oracle (Low Quality, Dial-up)

I hope you enjoy them, feedback so far has been pretty positive.

If you fancy it check out my website , it's still been built up but it gives some more info on me. I've also got a forum which I'm currently the sole member of so anyone who wants to say hi in there that'd be cool

Thanks for any feedback, it's really appreciated!

Tom
(aka DJ Henson aka TJH)

Viceroy · **Posted:** Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:05 pm

The tune itself I didn't like that much but
what's the sample you use at the beginning of the track?

DJ Henson · **Posted:** Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:33 am

Hi Viceroy, just out of interest did you think the tune was just badly made or did you not like the style? If you've got any suggestions for improvement please let me know.

The sample was taken from Pulp Fiction, classic film

Cheers
(aka DJ Henson aka TJH)

Viceroy · **Posted:** Sat Sep 25, 2004 4:09 pm

To be honest, the production was not that great.
The kick after the sample at the beginning is fairly artificial sounding.
The melody that comes in at about 3:00 is, I feel, too simple. There's basically 3 notes there. Since that is the basis for the rest of track, it weakens it. There is not much variation of the melody either, just a couple different ones, which gives is a repetitive sound.

Anonymous · Guest Member #: -1

well I though it was a good song. I have heard much better but this was still very good. could use better sounds though.