My Own Traxx <==> Power MAX [ mp69 - AV (orginal edit) ]

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mp69 - AV (orginal edit)

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OK, I'm listening right now and will give you comments as I listen.
Beginning is quite good, like the slow intro, layering on bass and sounds. Particularly like that kick you have that hits twice at the end of each section.
Like the layered way of introducing the melody, first as tho filtered, then bringing it to the foreground. And continuing with that lovely kick!
Like the melody, nothing earthshaking but decent. Those stabs of synth after the breakdown are quite creative. I like the way you just have the stabs to start, then weave them in with the main melody. They seem a little off though, as though they don't fit, but maybe this was your intention? Certainly gives it a interesting twist.
I've never liked breakdowns, when the focus is on the non-melodic parts of the track, so I don't particularly like yours, but it does give a break from the track. I think the reintroduction of the track, after the break, it a little weak - perhaps you could add a new element, instead of replaying the old ones? The breakdown also seems a little drawn-out. In my opinion, a slightly shorter one might be better.
One more thing, is that after the break, the melody plays for a short time, when I think we are ready to hear it for a bit longer.
The outro is well done, layering off stuff, basically the opposite of the buildup.

Overall, a very well done track! (I'm not a DJ, nor a producer, so the above are my strictly unprofessional opinions). I'd be interested in more stuff from you.