Final Call-Fallen Angel Review please

TranceAddict14 · **Posted:** Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:31 am

Hi Everyone i recently made a new tune and i think this is my best work so far...so can some one review it for me?
www.soundclick.com/3/bands/finalcallmusic.htm

Anonymous · Guest Member #: -1

Snare is just horrible. Totally out of place. Try fading them in. something was missing....

Rickorion · **Posted:** Fri Sep 24, 2004 10:30 pm

The sounds sound too preset. Try adding some reverb, delays and compressors to your sounds to make them not sound so canned.

Great ideas, but the production needs work.

Viceroy · **Posted:** Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:53 pm

Good tune. THe piano is a very nice addition.
However, that hi-hat/clap or whatever needs to be fixed. There's something very amateurish about it.
The melody is pretty good, I like it.
And there's one more thing -during the changes from each section of the melody to the next there is a small pause which really breaks the mementum build up.
Other than that, good tune!

TranceAddict14 · **Posted:** Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:33 pm

Thanks for the comments guys....i'll try and work on the song some more..but im currently putting most of my efforts doing a remix of Oceanlab-Satellite..i'll post it wehn im finished

Steven H · **Posted:** Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:53 pm

Yes sounds very patched..

All the music sounds ok, and its doesnt go off... but lots of time needs to go into the development of your sounds... the clap needs work, the percussion needs work the snare needs to be changed somehow.

i suggest try to use reverb + delay and try to layer your instruments a little more. EQ the melodies etc... intensify them.

all in all it works as it is, meaning all the elements do sound ok together, but individually they all need work, if you can understand what i mean?

keep up the good work!