Sunset Star

[TranceAddict14]

Hi all i made a new track and i would like some opinions from you people.
good and bad comments are welcomed! Final Call-Sunset Star
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/finalcallmusic.htm (oh yea the link acts stupid sometimes...so if it doesnt work for you...then it'll probly work later)

[Anonymous]

Sunset Star -

First thing, turn down the volume of the clap sound or get another that is as strung out. It gets kind of annoying. Turn up the synth a bit. Maybe fade in the snare (which was a cool snare). I liked the choir sound. It was very soothing. Its just me, but lose the vovals in the beginning I really liked the song even with those small flaws.

Ferry Corsten - Punk (Final Call's Drop it hard Mix)

Maybe get a lower synth sound for the beggining. The maing meoldy seemed a bit off for some odd reason and turn it up. the drum and bass beat was a bit out of whack. The remix was quality none the less. Good job.

You and Me (dub Mix) -

In the beggining, turn down the distant kick. Once again turn up the main melody and turn down the beat, both were very cool sounding. And turndown the snare, which i noticed you used in Sunset Star. Result: Awesome songs but they need some work.

[Steven H]

good feedback Stridr13 keep it up

[TranceAddict14]

Thanks on the reply man...im tryin to fix everything up at the moment anyway...

[Anonymous]

Now that I reviewed your tracks...review mine. I use the same website. And another called internet DJ but I only have one on there.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/audiotripmusic.htm


Oh, dont check out Raving Psycho. That one need a lot of work.

[TranceAddict14]

Im listenin to last laugh now....the laughing is kinda freaky...it sounds pretty psy-trance....(which i aint into) but the transitions are pretty kool.i lke the sound effect sound at like 1:35. its a pretty good all around decent track..something i would throw out at a rave.Try doing some uplifting and get back to me

[Anonymous]

Did you check out Requiem and Cecilia (Rip Tide 2)?