New melody - pretty please review it

DomZ · **Posted:** Sun Dec 28, 2003 12:22 am

i call it unborn, please post me with hate shit and stuff so i can improve it (compliemnts welcome also, hehe):

Unborn [337kb]

davehart · **Posted:** Sun Dec 28, 2003 12:34 am

Difficult really to say much about it without any build up or main lead off.

Very darkish build, spooky in a way.

DomZ · **Posted:** Sun Dec 28, 2003 12:42 am

Just want to know if the melody, and general 'jist' is going in the right direction, further sampling below:

Some Lead To It [565KB]

Pappa · **Posted:** Sun Jan 11, 2004 7:16 am

technics · **Posted:** Sun Jan 11, 2004 9:23 am

not enough to say anything truly representative of what it is... but the beginning starts off well.. sounds like a good tune.. then close to the end it sounds typical..

Viceroy · **Posted:** Tue Jan 13, 2004 4:26 am

NOt too keen on it to be honest. I think it needs more power - it sounded more like a buildup to a melody than the acutal melody. Also it just didn't sound very professionally produced, to me anyway.

vh6666 · **Posted:** Fri Feb 06, 2004 10:56 pm

The sounds were good and I would like to hear more. I think it is a bit early to worry about production before a song/track has been written.
Keep at it!