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DJ_Zirkonium
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Joined: 13 Mar 2003 Member #: 3,356 Posts: 4 Location: Montreal, Canada
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Post subject: My first song - Need Feedback |
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Hello, I'm a new artist on mp3.com
post your comments on the song I have made, thanks!
Synbox - Entrée en Trance
www.mp3.com/synbox
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2003 9:29 pm |
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DJ_Zirkonium
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My second track is available on my page.
the title is: Synbox - Space War
-zirk
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2003 6:13 am |
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mommozz
Cloakroom Duty
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Joined: 06 Mar 2003 Member #: 3,328 Posts: 10 Location: Malaysia
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i would say entree en trance is better than space wars. But, ur entree en trance is not bad. u just might need fixes at the 1:24... its kinda stiff over there. prehaps u should add a crash or any other things to change it and at 2:06 also lil stiff. should add snare roll. bass line should be louder. Hats should be more open. kick should be more heavy. song structure is very consistant, should be different especially the 3 quarter the the end.
look here, i am not becoming a smarty-pants here. just wanna give opinion in making ur songs better...
but this is ur first songs, its considered very good... well done. Good luck!
i give it a 6/10 since this is ur 1st song
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Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2003 8:54 am |
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PeterB
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Joined: 16 Feb 2003 Member #: 3,260 Posts: 276 Location: Netherlands
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For me its sounds a bit as an old commodore 64 track for a game, ou know...
But a very nice commodore 64 track then
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 3:36 pm |
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