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Richard Fletcher - Beyond Vision [DEMO]

 
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Hello to all at i:Vibes!!!

Here is a demo of my new track which is hopefully getting released. The track is not yet finished, and the volume levels are far too high at the moment. Nevermind... All feedback welcome!!!

http://www.mycgiserver.com/~richardfletcher/Richard%20Fletcher%20-%20Beyond%20Vision%20[DEMO].mp3

Kind Regards,

Richard Fletcher
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It's quite good. I like the synths u've used. There's a very professional sound to it. The melody is very nice, and original. Good tune!
May I ask what equipment/software you've used for this track?

P.S. I assume you left out the intro and outro on purpose? Cuz it would be more DJ-friendly if you had an intro/outro Smile

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seems like a godo track Wink

the only thing i missed was a little variety, the track has only one melody... but the rest seems quite ok, good balance in the percussion and a good synth melody.

cheers!
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ooh what have we here, another commendable track Very Happy

what is most striking, is your synths, they sound damn, good sharp and vibrant,

hmm, its nicely gets going to the main synth melody, and then the keeping the melody going is excellant, but theres 1 thing i noticed, its probably because you've mentioned that the volume levels are too high, is that when the synths are going they sound like there one a repeating loop, its like its goes full whack then after tiny intermission , it winds down slightly for a bit, then very quickly back up, then winds down, (like its being ramped up and down quickly) in addition the main melody is kinda drowing out any background layers, theres sum nice buildups in there Smile

maybe you could build up the background beat melody up along with the main melody, like get the beats going faster and faster and the main melody changing in line with it, as it kinda seems to me, that the background beat is constant (monotonous) and just the main melody changing, or at times the oposite, the background beat changing but the main synth melody is becoming monotonous..

take for example Cygnus X - Orange Theme, that has a beat that is distinct from main melody and changing, but works with main melody,

i dunno, hehe. just my observations, im not downhartely critizing your track, rather trying to come up with maybe useful constructive points

for sum reason, this track to me, gives me the impresion that if driven harder and faster (could make a nice remix)

anyways like you says its a demo, and still a work in progress, none the less it shows promise.

as for it being released, all the best! hopefully, its a sucess, and your hard efforts pay off, all the best Very Happy

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